10/22/2014

Colours yes, City, Possibly not...


Im very unsure about this, mainly the huts, i might keep trying to adjust it, get some charm back but still looks like a village more than a city.

One to come back to i think -

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  1. The colours are working really well, I love the atmosphere you're getting in there as well.
    It does kind of still look like a village, maybe you could add more structures in the distance to show that it is actually a vast space.

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  2. This looks amazing Becky! You really have an eye for unusual yet sumptuous colour combinations. Love the structures on the far left by the way! If you think it looks more like a village, maybe just interpret it as the outskirts/entrance of the city?

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    1. Every time i try to make it look more like a functional city it looks so cluttered so saying its outskirts / entrance of the city... genius, pure genius! thanks :)

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  3. This is quite an interesting piece, it has great potential. I'm not entirely sure about the depth of field, perhaps play around with the contrast and haze to give some sense of things being in the background and some in the foreground?

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    1. Depth is something I'm really trying to work on at the moment, but i will go back to this and work into it a bit more, thanks for the feedback.

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